Comments for Le Vol Du Corbeau - Tome 1

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"I thought there should be a consistency of phrasing between some lines that recur in the second book, and I trasnlated them better there."
pikayev, 14:02 28|06|09

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"He managed to trace you, he said you were living in France."
pikayev, 03:56 22|06|09

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"I hired a detective to try and find out where you are"
pikayev, 17:49 21|06|09

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"they said they thought that you were ill"
pikayev, 07:37 21|06|09

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"I asked your friends to tell me if they knew where you were"
pikayev, 06:49 21|06|09

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"I sent you telegrams, but you haven't answered one"
pikayev, 05:57 21|06|09

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"I called your number but no-one answered the phone"
pikayev, 04:37 21|06|09

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"When I read your letter, I couldn't believe that you'd gone"
pikayev, 04:21 21|06|09

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"Buffin lost his child like dreams, and Mick lost his guitar"
pikayev, 15:20 20|06|09

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"You're the one I'll remember in these valleys of the green and the grey"
pikayev, 14:45 20|06|09

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"There's a man I meet, walks up our street, been a workder for the council for twenty years."
pikayev, 10:55 20|06|09

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"Elstree, remember me - I played a part in a B-movie"
pikayev, 09:32 20|06|09

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"running around over town getting whacked on scooby snacks"
pikayev, 04:18 20|06|09

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"Bugger in the short sleeves, fucked my wife, then split"
pikayev, 13:41 19|06|09

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"i found a love, but lost my soul"
pikayev, 09:53 19|06|09

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"official secrets? Fiction or fact?"
pikayev, 06:48 19|06|09

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"let me go"
pikayev, 12:01 16|06|09

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